Date of publication: 2017-08-27 07:44
`Though the essay is written very well, could it be improved further??I mean in the starting some pages, the content was lacking coherence and it was later only that all his words started moving in the same direction..Also, does writing causes or consequences in a sequence help??I mean could we be like writing causes from childhood(less focus on female education, pressuring here towards household chores) to middle ages(child marriage, high dropout around this time) to later ages(when women are discriminated in jobs)??Please help, and do point out if you felt my point was unwarranted
If you are going to put in an opinion that disagrees with your own, it is common to put this argument first. This makes your argument stronger as you can then refute it in the following paragraph.
Can I please ask you two questions?
Many people told me that I am not suppose to use 8776 I 8776 , 8775 we 8776 and 8776 you 8776 things like that in my writting. But I noticed you actually use them quite often. does that mean I could use these words in my writting?
Many thanks for your good materials for IELTS study.
I would like to ask something regarding expressions in the introduction part of writing task 7.
Some recommend expressions such as 8775 This essay agree that.., Firstly, this essay will discuss., Secondly, it will discuss other .. 8776 in the introduction part.
here is same i too had 665 last year and this year 85!!, could not improve rank or upgrade year also IRS. help for strategy.
This is much better and is certainly a band 7. However, it not a case of making changes to main points and paragraphing to get . It get you must have less grammar and vocabulary problems. You must work on your English language to achieve that score. Why don 8767 t you try another essay title to see how you get on.
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I strongly believe that conventional medicine and alternative therapies can and should coexist. They have different strengths, and can both be used effectively to target particular medical problems. The best situation would be for alternative therapies to be used to support and complement conventional medicine.
One of the things the examiner is looking for is a clear point of view sustained throughout the essay. Accordingly, it makes sense to state your point of view clearly in the introduction. This way it makes it easy for the examiner to see what you are doing. The one problem with this approach is that it makes your conclusion slightly harder to write, as you have already given your answer in the introduction.
I have been experienced some issues about how to understand the 8775 main 8776 question whenever I come accross 8775 to what extent do you agree or disagree? 8776 For example:
This is no small point because it tells you that whatever the form of the question, you need to be able to explain and exemplify your answer ( see coherence).
I have a very big problem with preparing for IELTS( Academic).
I took IELTS for 8 times and my overal band score was in all of them.
My first time I scored in every module.
The second and the third I had in Listening, 6 in Reading and Writing and in Speaking.
I really don 8767 t know from where to start with studying,
I have many books for IELTS, but I don 8767 t know which one is the best.
Please suggest me only 9 four books (one for every part of the exam) which are the best according to you.
In a conclusion paragraph / opinion paragraph , in case of a discussion or opinion essay, if I state the solution or measures to improve a situation, will it be considered as off topic or will it impact on task response?